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I am learning to make my writing more interesting for the reader. I know I will be able to do this when I add more detail, interesting word... -
Hello, my name is James.I live in Taylorville. I go to Paparoa Range School. I have 1 sister, 1 cat and 1 goat. My favourite food is a chick...
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ReplyDeleteI like that you have thought creativity to solve your problems and you have a range of solutions. It would be great if you could fully explain what you were trying to do so it's clear for the reader. Ka taea e koe! You can do it!
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have solved problems. Is it clear to the reader what your question is? I wonder what you were learning to do.
ReplyDeleteHello James I really like how you where being creative with your work.Next time you could make the words a bit bigger.I think you have some cool pictures keep up the great work!.
ReplyDeleteok next time i will make the words bigger
Deletehi james you can make the words dig just ask alex and he will tell you ok.
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Hi James C, I am Natalia and I go to Hornby High School. You have done a great job on this blog post. I like how you have said what you were doing for maths but I think that for next time you could but lots more detail and say more about what you were learning. But great job.
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